tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-211418732645974738.post2423315133184115994..comments2023-08-05T05:53:59.454-07:00Comments on windmills of my mind: The Virgin Boy's StoryMakhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15051394602620626901noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-211418732645974738.post-3481815705062830922007-03-06T06:23:00.000-08:002007-03-06T06:23:00.000-08:00And souls entwine in their own furnace..dont stop....And souls entwine in their own furnace..<BR/><BR/>dont stop.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-211418732645974738.post-83399565545568241922007-02-20T07:08:00.000-08:002007-02-20T07:08:00.000-08:00came back in time to read this...topic is attracti...came back in time to read this...topic is attractive...poem makes u feel like u're actually living it...Jennifer A.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06618639466963813761noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-211418732645974738.post-4344022469654608332007-02-01T01:55:00.000-08:002007-02-01T01:55:00.000-08:00amazingly beauiful!amazingly beauiful!Neerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02411136800233797611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-211418732645974738.post-10271318117483883232007-01-28T03:14:00.000-08:002007-01-28T03:14:00.000-08:00Noni,
You didn't specify why exactly you want me ...Noni, <br />You didn't specify why exactly you want me to change that. I meant to say "She moans softly as i trace kisses"... You have not given a reason for me to change it, although I dont mind changing it as it would not take anything from its context.<br /><br />And I understand you not liking it if someone did that to you... I've actually heard some girls say they can't stand someone else's saliva... you're not alone. Thnks for stoping in.Makhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15051394602620626901noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-211418732645974738.post-7359007566538709852007-01-28T03:01:00.000-08:002007-01-28T03:01:00.000-08:00Wow! I love this one. Ok - i'd probably hate if so...Wow! I love this one. Ok - i'd probably hate if someone did this to me but what if you changed I to me in this line in the second verse?<br /><br />"She moans softly as <b>my</b> kisses trace;"<br /><br />Please ignore me f you think i've stepped out of line. I really like your work.Noni Mosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15219595871722435254noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-211418732645974738.post-41323819959152226632007-01-13T01:19:00.000-08:002007-01-13T01:19:00.000-08:00I like this one.I like this one.laspapihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15623856064617482177noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-211418732645974738.post-11178298739635120672007-01-12T11:20:00.000-08:002007-01-12T11:20:00.000-08:00As the sun watched a mortal kiss a goddess... that...As the sun watched a mortal kiss a goddess... that was gorgeous... Me i'm going to convince my boyfriend to stop writing those 'shoot-em-up' raps and focus on something this romantic... lol.. shebi valentines day is coming around... welcome to blogsville.. you rock(lol.. i realize i don't know when you started but since i haven't come on your blog b4 2dai.. i go welcome you sha!)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-211418732645974738.post-65502635179759347092007-01-11T07:32:00.000-08:002007-01-11T07:32:00.000-08:00'Zuka
My YIM is macalurs@yahoo.com. Gimme a holla...'Zuka<br /><br />My YIM is macalurs@yahoo.com. Gimme a holla and you could get one or two lessons.(Now I'm sounding all proffessor-ish)<br /><br />nilla bebe<br />I know I know. But let the non nairalanders benefit too. If you noticed I editted it.. just a litttle bit. You're always in my blog, I really appreciate that.Makhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15051394602620626901noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-211418732645974738.post-57290147334388488262007-01-11T04:48:00.000-08:002007-01-11T04:48:00.000-08:00You already know what I think of this one..
Anywa...You already know what I think of this one..<br /><br />Anyways NICE!Nillahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07027946876144330047noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-211418732645974738.post-824949830455045842007-01-11T04:20:00.000-08:002007-01-11T04:20:00.000-08:00Sweet...
Hey, when're you going to give me those ...Sweet...<br /><br />Hey, when're you going to give me those lessons?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com