At thy eyes, in bewilderment I gaze,
Reminding my mind the merits of sanity,
As amidst thy hearts many colors, I stand amazed.
My life's journey sealed by Time's timed calibre
My journal is empty, but my time far spent,
Beholding in daze, a cat at another, purr.
In fascination I savor this moment
With ardent oblivion of the day preceeding
Yet saving my favorite rose, and kissing her frozen.
Is there a world beyond her?
Like bugs to flame, I'm drawn to wonder.
11 comments:
I like :-), especially the last line of each paragraph.
Very nice poem it was very much enjoyed.
"In fascination I savor this moment..." Just that line alone moved me...some moments/minutes/seconds cannot be exchanged for the most precious stones, its all about that very TIME...all about that 'gaze'...
If it's love, at that moment, you begin to wonder like u said, "is there a world beyond her?"
thinker's block ko
thinker's block ni
Reminding my mind the merits of sanity
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Mack you are genius... I love it. I love how you can take anything and make it extraordinary. It's beautiful and I am completely blown away :)
like me...will there ever be a love like that? all the friction was becos we couldnt know how to lett it flow between us.
dont stop writing...everything youve written is uniquely beautiful!
Intriguing poem! Provoked a lot of thought about my own life.
Thank you!
Have a great weekend!
I absolutely loved this poem... "is there a world beyond her?"... the wonder...
Thanks for all ur comments. I appreciate them very much.
Beautiful words... I stand awed.
you have that THING on you
I don't know what it is
but...it shows in ur writing
just so interesting
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