Hand in hand
The bubbles encircle toward my lips
Bursting loudly
"Pop! haa" "Pop haa!"
A man satisfied at final sips--
"Ahaa!" says I, "Ahaa!" says I
Ear to Ear
Tunes hypnotize me a trance
Tango mildly
"Romp! haa " "Romp! haa"
Up man, it's time to dance--
"Ahaa!" says I, "Ahaa!" says I
Goddess to Mortal
I breath her air, such uncharred ardour
Breathe slowly
"Hmmm haa!" "Hmmm haa!"*
Son of man, it's thy turn and it's her alter--
"Ahaa!" says I, "Ahaa!" says I
But round and round
Of her crystal charms, I doth reek
Dying softly
"...! haa" "...! haa"
Music plays when strong men grow weak--
"...!" says I, "...!" says I
But for a goddess, strong men die,
"Ahaa!" says I, "Ahaa!" says I.
11 comments:
Ahaa!....nice one :-)
revelation....
hmmm, when I read you, I a;ways pause. always.
LOL, interesting
that was really nice, u've got talent
mii likey
great.. you are really talented sha
Ahaa says I
lol
hmmm...wow, I'm trying to imagine ur mindset as u were writing this piece...
OOOHHH Mack Lite! You are talented.
I came back to re-read this little gem when I could languish a bit longer here and really savor it.
May you be filled with sunshine, lollipops, and rainbows everything when you return. Give me a shout when you are here.
MAck...Ahhaa says I!!!
pls update...dis poetry thing...can't wait to read more of it
and just to let you know that ill be leaving blogsville very shortly but its sad cos your blog is one amongst the many I have really enjoyed. Ill endevour to stop by on the way out should you have updated by then. See you soon. All the best
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