Paint my love
Thine hair's color
Make me cry
And crave its savor
Soak my love
In thine tears
Charm my heart
A thousand years
Brand my love
Thine lip's mark
Enslave my words
And chain my heart
Make my love
Thine love forever
Let me love you
Tomorrow like never.
11 comments:
WOW!!!
I'm left speechless and breathless!
The last paragraph is the most powerful...gosh, love can make u a slave for it...
"Make my love
Thine love forever
Let me love you
Tomorrow like never."
Email me if you want to join Bloodlessness. I don't think you are part of our happy crew. We need more dark and cool poets--actually there never can be enough.
paint me black n white... rainbow
You put me to shame. I love that poem! I'm in awe
@nills, please take a deep breath... You dont have to utter nothing.
@JC, thanks.
@My enemy, Most certainly will, my pleasure.
@Neers, I will, promise.
@Noni, ey yaaah, you know I didn't mean to do that. Thanks for stoping by.
beautiful
and
haunting
Cool but the use of "Thine" in a poem is so Victorian. Just my two cents.:-)
kii,
That's the aim.
Enslave my words
And chain my heart
I can't wait to be that vulnurable again...
Your writing is simply...beautiful!
Beautiful.
Post a Comment