Tuesday, February 20, 2007

Paint My Love

Paint my love
Thine hair's color
Make me cry
And crave its savor

Soak my love
In thine tears
Charm my heart
A thousand years

Brand my love
Thine lip's mark
Enslave my words
And chain my heart

Make my love
Thine love forever
Let me love you
Tomorrow like never.

11 comments:

Nilla said...

WOW!!!

I'm left speechless and breathless!

Jaycee said...

The last paragraph is the most powerful...gosh, love can make u a slave for it...

"Make my love
Thine love forever
Let me love you
Tomorrow like never."

Enemy of the Republic said...

Email me if you want to join Bloodlessness. I don't think you are part of our happy crew. We need more dark and cool poets--actually there never can be enough.

Neers said...

paint me black n white... rainbow

Noni Moss said...

You put me to shame. I love that poem! I'm in awe

mack said...

@nills, please take a deep breath... You dont have to utter nothing.

@JC, thanks.

@My enemy, Most certainly will, my pleasure.

@Neers, I will, promise.

@Noni, ey yaaah, you know I didn't mean to do that. Thanks for stoping by.

Kafo said...

beautiful
and
haunting

Kiibaati said...

Cool but the use of "Thine" in a poem is so Victorian. Just my two cents.:-)

mack said...

kii,

That's the aim.

àshakë said...

Enslave my words
And chain my heart

I can't wait to be that vulnurable again...

Your writing is simply...beautiful!

Daddy's Girl said...

Beautiful.