Thursday, February 15, 2007

Another Day Without Her

Another day without her
From my shivering hands
To the noise in my soul
her voice tears at my hearts gaping hole

I beg God for ten Seconds
Or five in her arms
That I could create my eternity;

I have her to console me
She told me: "I'll always be your baby."

8 comments:

Nilla said...

Awwww!!!



Aight I'm off to sleep

Jaycee said...

Dang! You're pulling some strings in my chorda tendinae (yeah research that!). Geez Mack!

So short, but yet so piercing!

Elle said...

Awwwwwwwwwwwww..... hmmmm... awwwwwwwwwww.... Mack, you are turning me into the mushy gooshy type with all these lovely words...

So sad yet so beautiful...

Neers said...

perfect!

p.s: really??

mack said...

@nills, aww you back

@JC, do I do that? awww!

@ elle, That's the plan

@ Neers, yup.

Overwhelmed Naija Babe said...

that was lovely!!!

àshakë said...

I beg God for ten Seconds
Or five in her arms
That I could create my eternity;

dang. that got me

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