Friday, March 2, 2007

The Art Of Moving On

At thy eyes, in bewilderment I gaze,
Reminding my mind the merits of sanity,
As amidst thy hearts many colors, I stand amazed.

My life's journey sealed by Time's timed calibre
My journal is empty, but my time far spent,
Beholding in daze, a cat at another, purr.

In fascination I savor this moment
With ardent oblivion of the day preceeding
Yet saving my favorite rose, and kissing her frozen.

Is there a world beyond her?
Like bugs to flame, I'm drawn to wonder.


Nilla said...

I like :-), especially the last line of each paragraph.

Anonymous said...

Very nice poem it was very much enjoyed.

Jaycee said...

"In fascination I savor this moment..." Just that line alone moved me...some moments/minutes/seconds cannot be exchanged for the most precious stones, its all about that very TIME...all about that 'gaze'...

If it's love, at that moment, you begin to wonder like u said, "is there a world beyond her?"

Kafo said...

thinker's block ko
thinker's block ni

Reminding my mind the merits of sanity

Elle said...

Mack you are genius... I love it. I love how you can take anything and make it extraordinary. It's beautiful and I am completely blown away :)

Anonymous said...

like me...will there ever be a love like that? all the friction was becos we couldnt know how to lett it flow between us.

dont stop writing...everything youve written is uniquely beautiful!

~Deb said...

Intriguing poem! Provoked a lot of thought about my own life.

Thank you!

Have a great weekend!

Anonymous said...

I absolutely loved this poem... "is there a world beyond her?"... the wonder...

mack said...

Thanks for all ur comments. I appreciate them very much.


Beautiful words... I stand awed.

Sparkle said...

you have that THING on you
I don't know what it is shows in ur writing
just so interesting