Tuesday, October 9, 2007

Inside

Doors shutting carefully
Pacing me to footsteps unheard
Dragging thy mind along with me
I'm in your head, say few words

Your pulsating mind
The silent noise in my brain
In wonderland, my thots aside
I savor the mind, of a fine dame

Astride amidst her trite yet novel thoughts
I find my name on walls etched
With joy my heart art gone nuts
Though names unknown of anoter mesh'd

As her voilent rages roar
That she realize who her intruder be
I sail the seas on broken oars
unbeknownst, her true thoughts for me.

15 comments:

Jaycee said...

hmmmm...

You feel like you want to be inside her head? or are you really inside her head? An intruder is someone who really shouldn't be there...

Shakespeare...is he still in love?

Anonymous said...

Wow... You can get into her head... But can you get into her heart?

I`m loving this poem :)

Anonymous said...

Wow... you can get into her head... But can you find a place for you into her heart?

Kafo said...

che
what is one left to think

hmmmm

Elle said...

ussHey Mack darling.. how are you?? so I have been so silent.. but I still you still making me go weak in the knees with your beautiful words :)

curvyice said...

hey mack, where have u been, update OHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.

Kiibaati said...

U r the most prolific (and one of the most creative) poets I know in blogville.

One year has gone by and am still reading you.

Mack, you are the mark!

Kiibaati said...

U r the most prolific (and one of the most creative) poets I know in blogville.

One year has gone by and am still reading you.

Mack, you are the mark!

Jaycee said...

Dude, I tagged u o...

I wonder where u are sef...

Nilla said...

Merry Christmas!!

It's been a while. I still love your poetry!

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Neers said...

heyyy Mack, where art thou??

new year wishes, my friend!

Oracle said...

Hey Mack, where you at?
Update.

Happy new year

Neers said...

where are you??

Neers said...

i know that!!!! :) sometimes, some things you jus keep away from ppl!! :)