Wednesday, January 10, 2007

The Virgin Boy's Story

Our lips met and time stopped
As the sun watched a mortal kiss a goddess
When eyes are kissed shut, emotions erupt
And souls entwine in their own furnace
I pause as tears from her eyes roll
T'was just us two, and no tomorrow.

The wind is still 'tis evening
Nothing's moved like nothing dares
Even the birds refuse to sing
Like God hath paused His chores and stare
She moans softly as I kisses trace;
I lick the sweet tears from her face.

My melting heart I cannot help
My tears let go as taste I her breasts
She smells like angels ought to smell.
And I shall make her bosom my nest
And let it be told and re-told in the cosmos as destiny;
That I slept in her arms, and the rest-- history.


Copyright © macalurs 2006

10 comments:

azuka said...

Sweet...

Hey, when're you going to give me those lessons?

Nilla said...

You already know what I think of this one..

Anyways NICE!

mack said...

'Zuka

My YIM is macalurs@yahoo.com. Gimme a holla and you could get one or two lessons.(Now I'm sounding all proffessor-ish)

nilla bebe
I know I know. But let the non nairalanders benefit too. If you noticed I editted it.. just a litttle bit. You're always in my blog, I really appreciate that.

Overwhelmed Naija Babe said...

As the sun watched a mortal kiss a goddess... that was gorgeous... Me i'm going to convince my boyfriend to stop writing those 'shoot-em-up' raps and focus on something this romantic... lol.. shebi valentines day is coming around... welcome to blogsville.. you rock(lol.. i realize i don't know when you started but since i haven't come on your blog b4 2dai.. i go welcome you sha!)

laspapi said...

I like this one.

Noni Moss said...

Wow! I love this one. Ok - i'd probably hate if someone did this to me but what if you changed I to me in this line in the second verse?

"She moans softly as my kisses trace;"

Please ignore me f you think i've stepped out of line. I really like your work.

mack said...

Noni,
You didn't specify why exactly you want me to change that. I meant to say "She moans softly as i trace kisses"... You have not given a reason for me to change it, although I dont mind changing it as it would not take anything from its context.

And I understand you not liking it if someone did that to you... I've actually heard some girls say they can't stand someone else's saliva... you're not alone. Thnks for stoping in.

Neers said...

amazingly beauiful!

Jaycee said...

came back in time to read this...topic is attractive...poem makes u feel like u're actually living it...

Anonymous said...

And souls entwine in their own furnace..

dont stop.